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Drops of Falling Crimson
Another drop of crimson falls
As night’s cold fingers tighten their hold
All I feel is beautiful numbness
Falling into her silent world
Night promised a life without pain
Freedom and dreams that I could grasp
This I heard while I slept
Until I reached for her fingers of ice
Holding my body within her arms
Whispering sweet lies as I grow cold
One last drop of crimson falls
Decorating the floor before I die
Another drop of crimson falls
As night’s cold fingers tighten their hold
All I feel is beautiful numbness
Falling into her silent world
Night promised a life without pain
Freedom and dreams that I could grasp
This I heard while I slept
Until I reached for her fingers of ice
Holding my body within her arms
Whispering sweet lies as I grow cold
One last drop of crimson falls
Decorating the floor before I die
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When I started, this wasn't what I had in mind but it just ended up coming out this way. I'm hoping it doesn't sound melodramatic, I was trying to capture the feeling and images in my mind.
Anyway read and let me know what you think, suggestions are always good.
(If the picture looks all blurry, view it in full-view and it'll show up clear)
Anyway read and let me know what you think, suggestions are always good.
(If the picture looks all blurry, view it in full-view and it'll show up clear)
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good work I like the imagery in this piece